Friday, 18 October 2013

Wednesday 16/10/2013

Today I was supposed to beautify my website and add appropriate colour, but the website had already been filled with colour. So i decided to check and edit my work. I asked my uncle to also give me feedback and he did this is what he said:


Dear Shaan,

Very good website but a couple of things to check on”-

1. Photos on Home page not fitting
2. Spelling mistakes on home page
3. On foods page – I do not like first 2 lines – can you think of somethingelse – as you are talking of cusines in these lines – you need to justify the sentences
4. Please look at para 2 on Foods page.  This needs to be worked on as I am not sure if it is correct or you mean to say something else.  Also the list of foods are not regional foods – please research on this point.
5. Festival page is good
6. Why don’t you call interesting sites page as Historical sites of india – think about it as your theme is india and its history and culture
7. Put your pictures in the same order as your write up.
8. Your fun page – change your picture to have something to do with india and call it FACTS PAGE


Regards,

Vikram

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So i worked on that and now my website is as good as a real website be another professional.



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